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I don’t want to know what I know,
I want to feel what I don’t…
I want you here and now,
I want to scream and shout.
I want to beg for
and I want to flee from
the one desire, the one feeling and one fate,
the one that follows my every step,
the one that conquers my very own heart
with all desperation in sight.
I want to think that I’m wrong,
I want to feel what I don’t…
I want to be who I’m not,
I want to be who you want.
©2007-2009 ~Etsugua
:iconetsugua:

Author's Comments

This was written a few months back, I just never felt like submitting it here. Other than that, I don't really think this needs a description...
In my view, this is probably the best thing I've wrote :)
Always sounded really good and, perhaps, too perfect :nod:

Opinions on it? :)

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:iconstrandedfighter:
it's really good. I like it. :)

--
"And I don't want the world to see me
'cause I don't think that they'd understand
when everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am!"-Goo Goo Dolls

"Underneath the ink of my tattoo
I've tried to hide my scars from you"-P!nk
:iconarlanthir:
Ah, nice indeed :D
Very true, I guess..
:iconetsugua:
I'm glad you do :) Appreciate it :aww:

--
Humanity has a serious problem: it is losing all it's great geniuses!

Newton died!
And so did Einstein!

As for myself... well I'm not feeling that well either!

So Check My Gallery Before I'm Gone
:iconetsugua:
Thanks :) Glad you like it =p
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--
Humanity has a serious problem: it is losing all it's great geniuses!

Newton died!
And so did Einstein!

As for myself... well I'm not feeling that well either!

So Check My Gallery Before I'm Gone
:iconyesbutnotwithyou:
this is really good and i love the emotion that it represents (if that makes any sence)

--
If you need to fall apart, I can mend a broken heart, If you need to crash then crash and burn you're not alone.
:iconetsugua:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :aww: And yes, it made sense =p
Thanks a lot for the :+fav: too :hug:

--
Humanity has a serious problem: it is losing all it's great geniuses!

Newton died!
And so did Einstein!

As for myself... well I'm not feeling that well either!

So Check My Gallery Before I'm Gone
:iconshadowmax76:
xP I seriously have no clue why this only has 6comments and 2 favourites.
Great simplicity. Great expression. Awesome flow, sometimes trippy but read carefully's the charm.

:ahoy: The series of 5-7 word lines never seem so true. xP I'll watch ya, cuz I can't really check the rest of your stuff right now. ==; work...and my being easily distracted...^^"

--
Evasive boredom gets the best of us procastinating fuckers.
There shouldn't be a reason in order to interact with someone, other than that you can.
Do not fear affecting someone's life, the only person to blame is the one who can't handle love.
:iconetsugua:
Hehe, yeah, well, glad to see someone likes it ;)
Thanks a lot for your words, I'm really glad you liked it so much :)

Don't worry about it, whenever you can ;)
I'm gonna go through your stuff as well :)
Thanks again :aww:

--
Humanity has a serious problem: it is losing all it's great geniuses!

Newton died!
And so did Einstein!

As for myself... well I'm not feeling that well either!

So Check My Gallery Before I'm Gone
:iconmistikelf:
Gostei do escreves-te, tão triste mas ao mesmo tempo tão verdadeiro.

--
Love will rule over all

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